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My Big Mistake
Author: mwmsissy
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(Added on Sep 20, 2006)
(This month 13973 readers) (Total 23554 readers) |
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I meet a man I talked with in a chat room and wind up being his slave. He also becomes my wife\'s lover and she becomes my mistress. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Sep 21, 2006 |
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I like the concept of the story. Writing could be a bit more "polished" (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Sep 20, 2006 |
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Get rid of the extra characters. The story was very hard to read. I only made it a couple of paragraphs. (5/10)
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