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The Geek Slave
Author: Syren
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(Added on Sep 19, 2006)
(This month 64487 readers) (Total 87750 readers) |
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A sexy slut finds someone to fulfil her needs |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
fellatrix
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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Beautiful erotic story. I hope there is more to come. (10/10)
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rce
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Oct 1, 2006 |
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Very good. As has already been pointed out, it could very well be written a bit slower. Then again, some other stories are too slow. (9/10)
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bracemaiden
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Sep 24, 2006 |
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I have to agree with somewriter - an interesting start, but it seemed a bit rushed. I like the twist that he wasn't at the address given. (9/10)
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somewriter
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Sep 21, 2006 |
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An interesting start. The ideas are fine, although if I may make a comment, the writing feels a little rushed - more description and going a little slower would greatly improve the story. Each little scene is only one or two paragraphs. (8/10)
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OlleKarl98
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Sep 20, 2006 |
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Great start, waiting for next part. (10/10)
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eagledenny
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Sep 20, 2006 |
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very good , waiting for more (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
IDCrewDawg
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Sep 20, 2006 |
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Quite an enjoyable story, I look forward to the future chapers. The spelling errors were not noticable enough to detract from the overall story however.
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ID (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
kilmarnock
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Sep 19, 2006 |
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Good story. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to the next chapter. (8/10)
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chksng19
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Sep 19, 2006 |
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Lots of silly mistakes, would be caught even by MS Word's checker.
Otherwise, excellent story, looking forward to more chapters. (8/10)
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yorts6572
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Sep 19, 2006 |
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Excellent start, looking forward to the next parts. Only reason I didn't give it a 9 for well written is the several typos. Some of which could have been caught with a good spell checker, others by a different person doing the proof editing. I know it is hard for me to proof my own writing, because I tend to read what I had intended to say, not what my fingers actually typed. (8/10)
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