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The Six Tasks of My Humiliation
Author: Alfamann
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(Added on Sep 14, 2006)
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After confessing her fantasies of submission and humiliation, Angela is set six tasks by her husband that are designed to totally degrade her |
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JimmyJump
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Quite the little journey, I must say.
Very well written, very balanced story that works crescendo towards... a bit of an unsatisfactory ending.
Okay, so the six tasks are done with and the trip to get there was delicious. But still, I somehow feel cheated at the end, because there could/should have been more to come.
For example, now that the six tasks were accomplished, it would have been nice to have had some sort of official surrender of Angela to her husband, to seal her submission to him.
That would have been nice.
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Abe Froman
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Oct 1, 2008 |
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Just incredible and very well done... kept me interested and aroused from the start to the finish... (9/10)
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quincy451
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Oct 3, 2006 |
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A very enjoyable story that does not rush the details. It basks in the emotions of the moment which makes it seem more believable. (10/10)
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TomOfSweden
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Sep 28, 2006 |
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I love how her internal struggles were portrayed. I'd love to see the continuation (10/10)
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chksng19
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Sep 27, 2006 |
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An absolutely excellent story, well crafted and gripping. Hoping there is more... perhaps, her arrival home, with hints of the future? (10/10)
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Racecar
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Sep 16, 2006 |
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Well written and believable story. I am looking forward to it's continuation and hope it doesn't end when she finishes the sixth task. (9/10)
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Engineer
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Sep 15, 2006 |
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Excellent! Anything is made as properly and exciting as possible, without ever becoming obscenely. The only disadvantage is, that the final parts are missing yet. (9/10)
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jip
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Sep 15, 2006 |
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Simply excellent. It is erotic, believeble without any extremes, could be a real life story. (9/10)
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bigcat
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Sep 14, 2006 |
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That is great erotica! Great pacing and suspense. A key to good writing -- the classic "what happens next?" -- is fulfilled wonderfully in this tale. Well done. Very, very well done. Mirrors my personal favorite theme: a woman consenting, even desiring to surrender to the erotic surprises of her lover/dom as a means of he rown sexual fulfilment. Look forward to the rest. (10/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Sep 14, 2006 |
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A very good story--I enjoyed it a lot. I bet the exchange student will have some good tales to tell his mates back home! I hope the humilation factor picks up in the last tasks. (9/10)
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Millie
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Sep 14, 2006 |
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I enjoyed this very much, the tasks set were just humiliating enough to be believable and I liked how they got harder to accomplish as time went by.
I would have liked more detail of how Angela and her husband had sex afterwards. If it was the best ever then tell the readers why and how.
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- Replied by:
Millie
(Edit) (Sep 26, 2006)
- Now that her sixth task is over, what will happen to Angela? I hope we get to find out.
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