|
Ratings and Reviews: |
Number
of Ratings: 4 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
50% |
50% |
0% |
|
Weighed
Average (?): (8/10) |
Average
Rating: (8.5/10) |
Highest
Rating: (9/10) |
Lowest
Rating: (8/10) |
|
|
|
|
Reviewer:
schoolboylv
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Sep 14, 2006 |
|
I really like your story but it is sometimes a little bit difficult to follow. I think you need to re-read it a few times and make sure that it is obvious who is being described and who is talking. Other than that this has the making of a great story. (8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
Reviewer:
masterdw
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Sep 13, 2006 |
|
Give me more!!! Let's have a week in the kennel from the POV of the slave. Let her experience different codes, preferably without her knowing what she is getting into. Perhaps a day in white so she is put at ease and moving upward each day. (9/10)
|
|
- Replied by:
The Siren
(Edit) (Oct 14, 2006)
- please read more of my stuff at karinsthimble.com
|
|
|
|
|
Reviewer:
Jaeger
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Sep 12, 2006 |
|
I'd love to read other stories in the series. Soapy is great. Pity we didn't get to find out about Code: Purple. ;) (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
Reviewer:
chksng19
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Sep 11, 2006 |
|
Excellent story, well written and few minor errors. I'd love to hear more about the kennel; maybe base other stories there? (8/10)
|
|
|