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Master returns
Author: Susan Caroll
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(Added on Sep 5, 2006)
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Master returns from a long trip to deal with disobedient slave |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
iseek
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Sep 7, 2006 |
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Very nice writing style. I hope there is more coming! The characters and the story are very realistic and nicely told. (9/10)
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Millie
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Sep 6, 2006 |
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Very nice. This works as a stand alone story or as the beginning of a longer exploration of their relationship. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Gregsta
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Sep 5, 2006 |
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I echo what Lews has said. I thought it was a wonderful story, well told and very believable. Keep up the good work Susan and thank you for sharing your work with us. (8/10)
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Mad Lews
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Sep 5, 2006 |
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Well written scene both believable and tightly plotted though brief enough to leave us hoping for more. I do hope your love of writing leads to more stories of this caliber. Let’s see these characters develop a bit. (9/10)
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