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      Average (?):  (7.5/10) |   
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    | Reviewer: 
    mkemse
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Jan 21, 2009 |   
    |  | need more to really pass judgement, but creative from your stand point (8/10) 
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    Mad Lews
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Sep 5, 2006 |   
    |  | Clearly written and it might be necessary background from your point of view. If it is a true story then maybe the mundane is a therapeutic way to start or perhaps you are still hesitant to address the true subject of your story. Whatever the case I do hope you come to grips with the matter and continue. Be aware that whatever your personal motives the story posted at this site would be viewed by it’s readers for entertainment. (8/10) 
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    La Toya
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Sep 5, 2006 |   
    |  | Great opening chapter. Its nice to have the background. I look forward to more. (7/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Lee Boudine
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Sep 4, 2006 |   
    |  | Recommended IF the author is very open in writing of her experiences. This introduction gives the reader a feeling of authenticity and desire to read more. (8/10) 
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    chksng19
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Sep 4, 2006 |   
    |  | Clearly written and well paced; I, too, am looking for more. (7/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    heycarrieanne
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Sep 4, 2006 |   
    |  | A good start, but way too short to really grade it.  I will be happy to raise my score if the rest of the story is done as well.  I like authors who give backgrounds for their characters and their stories. (7/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    pttwyn
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Sep 4, 2006 |   
    |  | Interesting (9/10) 
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