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The State
Author: The Odd Side of Jeff
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(Added on Aug 25, 2001)
(This month 92207 readers) (Total 144854 readers) |
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An epic story about a near future world of legal slavery. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
ALLAHHAVEMERCY
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Oct 9, 2011 |
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usually i don't go for sci fi crap because they are usually crap, but this one is quite well written, and the introductory paragraphs in the beginning actually are quite convincing. I am still reading it and I think this is very promising. The author constructs a completely absurd plot into something that is believeable. that requires a certain talent.
OK, I kept reading and I have to lower the review now because the author lacks any ability to describe a detailed scenario. What are the tortures like? For example, the rack, how is the victim being placed? The description doesn't paint a complete picture and leaves one hanging. The story also becomes very cliche after the middle of the first part and frankly I don't know if I can be motivated to finish it. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alexis
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Nov 8, 2001 |
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This was excellent. I was gasping for air by the middle of the first part. I enjoyed the thorough detail and attention to character and plot development. Very well-written, too. Features some heavier discipline, and a true no-nonsense vision of servitude and slavery. Maybe not for those whose understanding of slavery is drawn primarily from reading Anne Rice. (8/10)
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ownedgirl
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Sep 6, 2001 |
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very good story with a better than average plot line and the author seemed to keep the story flowing Hope to read more of this story as well as other stories from this author (8/10)
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merrymonk
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Aug 30, 2001 |
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this story can be taken through the whole BDSM cycle,' looking good'waiting for updates. (9/10)
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oldlion
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Aug 30, 2001 |
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A little drawn out for me. (5/10)
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quincy451
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Aug 27, 2001 |
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I really like the story developement and depth of the first chapter and look forward to seeing more in due time. Hopefully the author will write more and also keep the quality and depth up like this chapter. (9/10)
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texswim
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Aug 26, 2001 |
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Really enjoyed the story. A great account of slavery. Will be anxiously waiting for more. (9/10)
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hyphen666
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Aug 26, 2001 |
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The author gets very high marks for story development and background. The writing is good and the story flows well. However I am repulsed by the concept of this type of servitude, despite the psychological make-up of the heroine. Perhaps that's my hang-up, who knows. I'll not be reading any more of this budding epic. (7/10)
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