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Petrol Station
Author: jamb
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(Added on Aug 21, 2006)
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The life of Valerie, a twenty eight year old worker at a petrol station, changes forever on meeting three bubbly and vulnerable teenagers at her petrol station. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
ThisGirl
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Feb 18, 2007 |
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Very well written, this story did a good job exploring the confusion in the mind of an unwilling slave. I also enjoyed getting into the dominant's mind as well.
The suspense is also well developed, leaving me clamoring for more!
Great job!
The author deserves a more detailed review, which i plan on giving when I have more time.
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
themaneloco
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Sep 5, 2006 |
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I liked it, a nice theme and I'm interested to see how they deal with the other friend. Will she join them or share Valerie's fate? I will keep an eye out for further updates to find out. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jamb
(Edit) (Sep 7, 2006)
- One should be coming in a bit - thanks very much for your enthusiasm.
- Replied by:
jamb
(Edit) (Sep 7, 2006)
- One should be coming in a bit - thanks very much for your enthusiasm.
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Sep 5, 2006 |
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Very wrote a good story. The inner thoughts and struggles are just as important, if not more so, than the action in the story. It is unfortunate that the rating system cannot be more judicious and allow authors, with the site owner's agreement, to nullify a rating that is way out of alignment with the rest of the scores. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jamb
(Edit) (Sep 5, 2006)
- Thanks very much, nikita - I appreciate it. I'm slightly upset about the rating, but realise there's not much I can do.
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| Reviewer:
SternByNature
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Aug 22, 2006 |
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Theme was lost. I would have like to read about Val taking all of them back give them each a beating they would not forget. Snoby teens should be hurt. (1/10)
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- Replied by:
Curtis
(Edit) (Aug 23, 2006)
- Uhm, but that would've been a different story, wouldn't it? Next time, try reviewing the story that's written.
- Replied by:
jamb
(Edit) (Aug 25, 2006)
- I'm sorry, but that seems to be not my problem. I can appreciate it if the story took an unexpected twist and one that you were not happy with, but surely that does not warrant a one-star review. Also, it's bringing down my average. Which is annoying.
- Replied by:
25toLife
(Edit) (Sep 4, 2006)
- Read the rules please. You CANNOT rate a story based on its content.
God I'm sick of people acting like idiots.
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| Reviewer:
25toLife
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Aug 22, 2006 |
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Finally I get to be the first reviewer.... you have done a good job, especially with the mental activities. Can't wait to see more. I'm giving you a 10 in advance because I know you won't disappoint us. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
jamb
(Edit) (Aug 25, 2006)
- Thank you very much, 25toLife - I hope I shall not. Part 2 is being worked on as we speak.
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