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Fatman's Slave
Author: Joe@
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(Added on Aug 19, 2006)
(This month 17443 readers) (Total 29093 readers) |
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TEENAGE BOY IS BLACKMAILED IN TO BEING A SLAVE TO A FAT SADIST MAN |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
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| Reviewer:
slaveFranckParis
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Aug 21, 2006 |
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I think it's one of the best story i've read ever!!! May be because it's exactly the kind of situation that get me hard. I mean blackmail, fat man abusing younger thin boy, humiliation.....please don't stop!!! I ve read all the m/m nc stories on this site and this is the first one involving a fat master and a very young slave so please don't give up despite what people can say.
By the way i m french may be that 's why the grammar didn t annoy me. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Aug 20, 2006 |
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I have to agree with previous reviewers. (2/10)
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tbear4759
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Aug 20, 2006 |
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ditto what previous reviewer said. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
submit63
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Aug 19, 2006 |
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The idea is not bad at all, but the writing skills leave much to be desired. The grammar is terrible, rendering the story almost unreadable. Before posting the next chapters a careful proofreading by a patient editor is indispensable. The same applies to this chapter, which should be re-written and updated. Don't abandon the story, though. (2/10)
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