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Exchange student
Author: De Shadow
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(Added on Aug 15, 2006)
(This month 54232 readers) (Total 68003 readers) |
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A SM queen dose a favour for a frend, and finds a willing pupile |
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Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 29, 2006 |
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the story is good, but it needs major work, grammar, spelling ect (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
schoolboylv
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Aug 16, 2006 |
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So many mispelled words and grammar errors that it is almost impossible to read. Use spell check. (3/10)
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