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Serving Her Author: Wrt4ffun
(Added on Aug 12, 2006) (This month 48726 readers) (Total 57476 readers)
Essay and scenario

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Weighed Average (?): (6/10)
Average Rating: (6/10)
Highest Rating: (7/10)
Lowest Rating: (5/10)

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Reviewer: kinkcrazy (Edit) Rating: Aug 14, 2006
Very stream of consciousness with no set up or context. Couldn't get my attention (5/10)

Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Aug 13, 2006
Obviously, even though just for fun, the author can write. The perfumed vision of a better world when ruled by women, is shattered rather abruptly when dear Mrs Thatcher springs to mind... but then, THIS is fiction, SHE was real.
All in all, a promising start, which makes me look forward to next installments... (7/10)

Reviewer: heycarrieanne (Edit) Rating: Aug 13, 2006
You have major formatting issues which detract from any merit this "story" might have. There just didn't seem to be anything of any substance to this piece. (5/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Aug 12, 2006
my main problem with the story is that you used no codes for it nor did you offer any type of story ine to draw readers in, (5/10)

Reviewer: Millie (Edit) Rating: Aug 12, 2006
This was interesting, a totally different post from the norm. The two sections didn't, for me, meld together. A larger gap between the two would have shown the ending and beginning a little better.
I enjoyed the scenario the more of the two. It was a little clinical, but still definitely worth the read.
(7/10)

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