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The Vegan Sector Author: Oralia Cruz
(Added on Aug 10, 2006) (This month 49342 readers) (Total 55429 readers)
A young woman must become a sex surrogate to an alien race in order to win a war.

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Highest Rating: (8/10)
Lowest Rating: (4/10)

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Reviewer: ElectricBadger (Edit) Rating: Aug 11, 2006
Most of the story is meandering introduction and unneeded details (what was up with the battle scene that had no impact on anything else?) The actual body was entirely narration -- dump all of this for more dialogue and description! The choice of Vega as a homeworld was also a bit unfortunate; I kept thinking of Vegans who don't eat meat, and that was a harsh contrast with warlike lizards -- remember to think about the connotations of all your names and places! There was, however, some good imagination and though stifled by extraneous info, there was a good plot. Take this back to production, write an outline of your plot as a guideline, and rework this -- I look forward to seeing the result! (4/10)

Reviewer: Wistan (Edit) Rating: Aug 10, 2006
Could have been an interesting idea, but the execution isn't very good I'm afraid. No reach characterisation, no real attention to detail. It's just a meandering series of statements about "this happened, then he did that, then she said this..." from start to finish.
The sci-fi aspects are all bog standard cliches, the author doesn't try to do anything remotely original or interesting here - and again, the execution is pretty poor.
I hate to give low ratings, but to be honest I'm being generous with a 4. (4/10)

Reviewer: JulieC (Edit) Rating: Aug 10, 2006
Very readable, a good yarn, I recommend it! (8/10)

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