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Revenge For Sale
Author: nastyaryana
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(Added on Aug 7, 2006)
(This month 85747 readers) (Total 128934 readers) |
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The story revolves around an illegal prison for women who have been placed there by those who seek revenge upon them The central characters are two nasty female bounty hunters whose job it is to capture the prisoners and who enjoy torturing and humiliating the women they hunt. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Feb 15, 2012 |
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Could have been very good if the author had taken their time. As it is, it's a violent forgettable story with very little erotic quality. What I really enjoyed was how the author attacks past reviewers with such hate & disdain. This is here to review stories, not glorify them to the author's joy. If you don't like your work critically reviewed, don't read the reviews. You show very poor taste in your responses & that stayed with me while I read your story. And once again, this story is unfinished. I'm thinking it's a good thing, but if this author had such passion for their work to defend it in such a nasty manner, why didn't they finish it? Of course it's ok if the author ever reads this & wants to attack me as well. I won't be back to read their response...I'm off to read stories from authors who enjoy getting a true & honest response from their readers!
Cheers!!! (4/10)
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lover2214
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Jul 24, 2007 |
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Loved this story (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Janeane
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Oct 12, 2006 |
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Not all Lesbians want to be humiliated and raped. This story is horrible, schlocky, poorly organized. Go back to school and try again. (1/10)
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- Replied by:
nastyaryana
(Edit) (Oct 16, 2006)
- Plain Jane: I have more degrees than you will attain in a lifetime. If you don't like the story, resd fiction that is more respectable. Have fun in the library. With pity, Aryana
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| Reviewer:
KatMann
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Oct 12, 2006 |
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This story is so overrated it's laughable. I strongly suspect the author posted these reviews herself. LaToya is a dumb nigger, I've read her posts and she's an idiot. Gives Lesbians a bad name. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
nastyaryana
(Edit) (Oct 16, 2006)
- Kat: You seem to be a dumb racist. Incidentally, you should use a period or semicolon after nigger. Also, lesbian is not a propper noun and takes a small l. I would learn the language before being so contemptuous in your criticism of others. I am betting that you are not very educated yourself. Love, Aryana
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dennisthmn
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Aug 12, 2006 |
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execelent (9/10)
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- Replied by:
nastyaryana
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2006)
- Thank you Dennis. I am glad you enjoyed it. Ari
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richochet
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Aug 9, 2006 |
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Good story. Lovely set up. Nice fantasy (8/10)
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- Replied by:
nastyaryana
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2006)
- Yes, I too love the fantasy. I hope to be adding to it soon. Ari
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mkemse
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Aug 8, 2006 |
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can not wait til the next chapters are posted, sometime you read story andwant more then 1 chapter to begin with, this is one ofthose, hope you add more chapters on a regular basis (10/10)
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- Replied by:
nastyaryana
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2006)
- I hope I can live up to your expectations. Ari
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Aug 8, 2006 |
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Good work! Nice dialogue and very inventive. I'd love to see a bit more description v. narration (this was better in the second half) and the feelings, reactions and thoughts of the victims as well as the oppressors. I look forward to reading more! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
nastyaryana
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2006)
- I agree with your comments and will do my best to focus on the feelings and reactions of the characters. Ari
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| Reviewer:
geoff
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Aug 8, 2006 |
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Well written, good character development, bring on Chapter 2 ! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
nastyaryana
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2006)
- I hope you enjoyed chapter 2 and will continue to enjoy future chapters as well. Ari
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Aug 7, 2006 |
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Sorry but I have never started out with a review of 10.
This is a great start, And I will be watching for more chapters. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
nastyaryana
(Edit) (Aug 7, 2006)
- Latoya: Glad you liked it. I am working on chapter 2 now. Ari
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jawdrw
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Aug 7, 2006 |
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Aryana: I am a middle-aged woman of German extraction and love the main character, Katrina. She is so sexy. I identify like crazy. You write so well and have such perverse ideas. I got so turned on in anticipation reading chapter 1. Indidentally, I think this story is already much better than your first effort. While I enjoyed your first story, this one develops the characters more. Keep up the good work! Greta (10/10)
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- Replied by:
nastyaryana
(Edit) (Aug 7, 2006)
- Greta: Thank you so much. Please email me. I'd love to talk. Incidentally, looking at your profile, you are as sexy as Katrina! Ari
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motherannne
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Aug 7, 2006 |
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Aryana: A marvelous story. Great characters, excellent plot, and promise to be very sexy! I only hope that it is as nasty as your previous story, which I loved. Keep the chapters coming! I can't wait to read of Kat's handling of that spoiled bitch.. Anne (10/10)
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- Replied by:
nastyaryana
(Edit) (Aug 7, 2006)
- Anne: Thanks for the kind words. I hope that I don't disappoint you. Expect lots of nastiness! Ari
- Replied by:
nastyaryana
(Edit) (Aug 7, 2006)
- Anne: Thanks for the kind words. I hope that I don't disappoint you. Expect lots of nastiness! Ari
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