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Submissive Hilary
Author: Blueknight
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(Added on Aug 22, 2001)
(This month 17568 readers) (Total 36110 readers) |
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Professional model, Hilary is late for a session with her mistress, and gets a lot more of a session, than she bargained for. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 9, 2004 |
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not bad, not great (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 4, 2003 |
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I thought the story codes were a little misleading. I didn't find the story contained much that was either "reluctant" or "serious". All the same, it was a fair enough story - nothing particularly original but realistic enough. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Aug 23, 2001 |
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A good begining, some character development, decent writing free of glaring spelling errors, and obviously proof read are all positive attributes that this short tale possesses. The biggest problem that this type of story has is originality, something new and different. So far the author has not given me any hint that Hillary is going to be facing some novel trial or humiliation. If something does develop in future chapters I will gladly raise my score. (6/10)
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