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Dawn's Story
Author: Unknown
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(Added on Aug 22, 2001)
(This month 41044 readers) (Total 61569 readers) |
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Aliens (who look more-or-less human) come to Earth and 'de-evolve' selected people to their natural state to serve as slaves. Story follows the adventures of a particular slave and her loving mistress. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Wmnwholves
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Jun 30, 2004 |
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I have enjoyed this story but am dishearten that this story hasn't been updated. I would love to see more or other stories by this author. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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Apr 8, 2004 |
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Although there were a few imperfections in the actual writing, some wrong word choices and misspellings, that didn\'t really bother me. It was an interesting concept and something different for a change. The only thing is that it did run on a bit... you probably could have done more with less. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ron8nl
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Aug 15, 2003 |
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This story impressed and catered me most of all. Very creative especially in taking away what holds back in fantasizing that one can give in to his wish to become a pet to superior people.
Now and then it probably gets boring to people that are not in to SF or like some more action. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
BlackRad!sh
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Aug 28, 2002 |
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Amazingly, lovingly detailed psychological sci fi erotica. Made me happy this was a long read!!! (10/10)
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