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12 Rooms
Author: TheRapist
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(Added on Jul 23, 2006)
(This month 33801 readers) (Total 90052 readers) |
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Based entirely on actual events, this story details some of the macabre events that take place in a mysterious facility in the Nevada desert known only as 12 Rooms. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
TheDoctorIsIn
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Dec 24, 2008 |
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I enjoyed it, and yes it turned me on. I thought of the film Hostel as well. This however had more of a sensual touch to it. There doesn't have to be penetration for it to be sexual. A pity you stopped at only two chapters. (8/10)
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austerud
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Feb 8, 2008 |
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Great torture stories. I think the absence of sex is quite appropriate for both these tales. I certainly hope you continue the series. Thanks (9/10)
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susankarl
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Jan 26, 2008 |
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As I enjoy stories of cruel men and, particularly, merciless women torturing young women, of course I liked this story.
It got down to savagery a little too quickly for my tastes, perhaps. One does not get the chance to totally destroy a victim often enough to waste the opportunity in a quick slash and burn.
And I also feel that for the purposes of story-telling, a helpless naked girl would surely have received some sexual attention, even if it was hurtful.
Having said that, I am hoping to venture into the other rooms, so please post further chapters for our edification.
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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May 30, 2007 |
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This story is hard to rate. Basically there's no sex (you know the kind with exchanging fluids). In every chapter someone is tortured to death but in a pretty clinical way. The author really means the extreme label, there's cannibalism, brains are cracked, basically a slasher movie as story. It also seems to be important that the victims are completely innocent. One resembles an ex-wife, the other didn't phone in a week when a stranger gave her her number. If the excuse is so wimpy I would have preferred random victims.
I think only very few people will be turned on by this.
As a slasher story it's not bad only the evil people are not very good fiends. They don't capture their victims themselves, no special powers, no suspension. The stile is almost like a documentary they're no Freddy or Jason, that's for sure.
Grammar and spelling are OK. (4/10)
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avidreader
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Jul 28, 2006 |
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didnt like how all the text was large for some reason but it reminded me of the movie "hostel" which was just as gruesome if not quite as sexual. (7/10)
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Dick the Slaver
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Jul 27, 2006 |
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It is an excellent story for fans of Horror Stories and slasher movies. Keep up the good work hope to see more chapters in the near future. (10/10)
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Mothbrad
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Jul 27, 2006 |
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I always think it's nice when a story gets straight to the point and pushes boundaries, which this story does. Definitely not for everyone, as the first couple of reviews show, but for fans of gore films, etc, as well as sadism, this might ring some bells. (7/10)
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kimmi
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Jul 25, 2006 |
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Good start to the story but quickly declined. Basically some pretty sick stuff. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lascivious
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Jul 24, 2006 |
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Just plain disturbing.. in the bad way. (4/10)
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