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Jocko Trains Colin
Author: justin benedict
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(Added on Jul 21, 2006)
(This month 52484 readers) (Total 59406 readers) |
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When Black Master Jocko ordered his girlfriend\'s submissive husband to quit smoking, he meant it! |
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| Reviewer:
Stefanie1391
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Sep 30, 2006 |
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Very good. Just remember who the author is talking about and it gets very believable. Really humiliating and loving at the same time, try to do that yourself! (9/10)
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Millie
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Jul 22, 2006 |
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Usually I love your work but I think this might have been posted a little too soon. There are basic errors in it, such as the main character having two different names. It gave the whole story a feeling of being rushed. Having read most of your stuff, I know you can do better than this. Sorry to be brutal, but if others read this review I would hope that it would help them in the direction of some of your other wonderful stories. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
justincbenedict
(Edit) (Jul 22, 2006)
- Forgive me, Millie (are you planning to review everything I write, God I feel like you're my Boswell) It was originally called a 3 year old story called "Jocko Trains Frankie" but becaues there's a woman called Frankie in my storie "Bully Training" I changed Frankie's name to Colin, but I did it by using "replace" on the computer, not always pefect.
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