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The Appointment
Author: SFCityDom
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(Added on Jul 18, 2006)
(This month 49398 readers) (Total 63520 readers) |
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More the a cleaning |
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Weighed
Average (?): (8/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
J's blu
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Jul 25, 2006 |
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another gem Sir!! i must admit, i dont look for story codes on Your stories, i just see Your name and read it. You manage to get everything into one short story, humour (well, i find it so anyway) tension built nicely, and HOT bits!! next visit to the dentist will have me sliding back in the chair, closing my eyes, mmmmmmmmmmmmm. Yours blu (9/10)
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Reviewer:
little_rose
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Jul 20, 2006 |
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this was good- and quite amusing too;) you don't often get succint stories which fulfill both these things well. nice one dude! (8/10)
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Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jul 19, 2006 |
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Damn! Why can't I find a dentist like that? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
SFCityDom
(Edit) (Jul 19, 2006)
- I think because they will lose thier job. However, I do have a pair of scrubs with my name + DDS on them. You can pick a pretty good dental chair used on eBay.
- Replied by:
heycarrieanne
(Edit) (Jul 22, 2006)
- {{giggles nervously}} You wouldn't tease a girl, would you?
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Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jul 18, 2006 |
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Funny story, and a fantasy for all honest dentists, I'd bet. Nicely told, but you need to post story codes, please. You'll lose lots of readers when they search for M/F Oral and whatever else and dont' hit your story. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 18, 2006 |
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the story was good but you need codes and a minimal synopsis to draw readers in (7/10)
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Reviewer:
magnum
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Jul 18, 2006 |
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I enjoyed the entire concept, but I had trouble visualizing the position. I would have like a little more detail there. Would also have enjoyed some nipple play :) I was glad there was no actual dental work! Thanks for the story. (8/10)
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