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Cell Mate
Author: mothbrad
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(Added on Jul 1, 2006)
(This month 33840 readers) (Total 80546 readers) |
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A member of a sinister, secret government department hires a beautiful, sadistic woman to help him do his evil work. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
coyote3k
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Aug 24, 2012 |
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All I can ask for is more. This story is great. I've read many stories and this is one of the most cruel and it manages it without gore, beautiful. Maria will do anything she can think of to torment these girls. Please continue! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
bullfinch
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Apr 15, 2008 |
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well written. Maria is deliciously cruel. More, please. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Mothbrad
(Edit) (Apr 15, 2008)
- Thanks for the kind review, bullfinch. I think there might be more to the story, but there will certainly be more stories in the future.
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| Reviewer:
JonMaddux
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Dec 12, 2006 |
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This is easily one of the best stories i have EVER read anywhere! I cant believe how captivating it is. my only wish it that her first anal rape would have been greatly detailed and thorough to show how degraded she felt and how the guy hurt her asshole. Other than that it was frickin fantastic!! Your level if detail in everything was refreshing! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Mothbrad
(Edit) (Dec 12, 2006)
- Jon, thanks for taking the time to review my little story, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Everybody has their own special 'fetishes' and 'buttons', and, like most authors, I try to write for my own, but put enough in the story for others as well. Anal rape is probably low on my 'top ten', but I might include more of it for you in my next story (due for publication some time in 2009 lol)
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| Reviewer:
Lee Boudine
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Sep 6, 2006 |
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the author has a very fertile imagination. Some of the scenes are unique. However his development of the feelings are somewhat shallow. I'm sure with practice the author will improve his expressive skills. MOTHBRAD; you have a gift. I encourage you to write more stories. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Mothbrad
(Edit) (Sep 7, 2006)
- Lee, thank you very much for your review. I agree that the feelings in the story are shallow - that's part of what makes my writing style, for better or worse. What I consider erotic and perverse are not necessarily what others do, but I know that I cannot only write for myself if I am submitting to a public forum such as this one. For what it is worth, I find a detachment/alienation from the action highly intellectually stimulating, as well as erotic, and I know that very few other people feel that way. A story that I would love to emulate is 'True Love' on this site, which takes that detachment and poignancy almost to its ultimate conclusion.
I am currently spending my free time working on a couple of other stories, but free time is not something that is available all that often these days.
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| Reviewer:
arrakur
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Jul 6, 2006 |
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very well written and highly entertaining. in terms of the cruelties, the author dishes out many of the well-known and beloved ones and adds some quite unusual torments in the mix.
and a finished story at first posting!! very cool.
hope you choose to post some more, mothbrad. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Mothbrad
(Edit) (Jul 6, 2006)
- I appreciate the comments - I really just wrote the type of things that excite me, and the fact that some of them haven't been used in many stories is just a bonus.
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| Reviewer:
Dick the Slaver
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Jul 5, 2006 |
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I enjoyed reading your story. Please write more. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Mothbrad
(Edit) (Jul 6, 2006)
- Dick, thanks a lot for the review. It makes a difference to know that people are enjoying the story, and want to see more. When I have time, I will get to work on a sequel.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 2, 2006 |
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very different but very well done (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Mothbrad
(Edit) (Jul 2, 2006)
- I know you're a prolific reviewer, which is well worth of respect! It's nice to join the club of writers who have received your 'mark of quality'.
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| Reviewer:
susankarl
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Jul 2, 2006 |
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Excellent. Love your cruel characters and the slightly different tortures they perpetrated on their victims. Some delightful touches. I look forward to more adventures of the same main characters. Susan. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Mothbrad
(Edit) (Jul 2, 2006)
- Thanks for the review, Susan, I'm very glad that you enjoyed the story. I tried to put a different twist on common themes, and hope that's how it came across.
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| Reviewer:
mike uk reader
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Jul 1, 2006 |
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An excellent cracker of a story is CELL MATE by MOTHBRAD-It is long,very vibrant in content and should appeal to everyone who has any ounce of red blood in their veins even my favorite reviewer (missybeauty1985) should I hope even like this?
All credit to the author for placing it here I suspect in it's full completion, sometimes it can be a little annoying when some stories are so short and have to wait months for another chapter. I would love to give more than a ten top marks to you sadly I cannot. Hope to see more from you in the future. Good Luck. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Mothbrad
(Edit) (Jul 1, 2006)
- Mike, what can I say - thank you for being my first reviewer! The story is complete in the sense that it's self contained, but I am thinking of writing further sequels if enough people care about the characters and my style of writing. Thanks again.
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