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Weighed
Average (?):  (5/10) |
| Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
JayR
(Edit) |
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Jul 3, 2006 |
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See the little dots at the end of these sentences. They're periods. Use 'em. The sex is okay, but your writing skills aren't "literary"; they're horrible! (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Jul 3, 2006 |
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Scat, watersports not my stuff, but the author of this Kerouacesque/Burroughs-like wild sexual-fantasy-inflamed stream of consciousness -- very hard to pull off -- is successful in conveying the erotic-as-narcotic madness. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
tbear4759
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Jul 1, 2006 |
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it isn't every day you see a sentence that is a paragraph long! this story sucked (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 30, 2006 |
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a synopsis is need to draw readers in (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Jun 30, 2006 |
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Poorly conceived and poorly written. I would
begin by commenting on the run-on sentences and
go on from there, but why waste time writing a
review, when the author put so little care into
the story? (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Taoxx
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Jun 30, 2006 |
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I really like it. A great love story. Well written. The graphic scenes are the plot, more story wouldn't work here.
The gender codes are okay, too: it is both M/f and F/m. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jun 29, 2006 |
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There is no plot and no story -- only graphic violence! And perhaps you might want to learn the difference between M/f and F/m ... it is a BIG one! (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
DAF
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Jun 29, 2006 |
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The story isn't half bad based on plot and descriptions though comma usage would make the reading easier but I find it unforgiveable that you misrepresent story codes. There is a big difference between M/f and F/m. (6/10)
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