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My Place in Life
Author: Millie
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(Added on Jun 28, 2006)
(This month 52933 readers) (Total 125196 readers) |
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A submissive male tells his story. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
booman2
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Dec 1, 2007 |
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delightful (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nimir,Raj
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Oct 3, 2006 |
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very excellent,most pleasurable reading..Me and My sub read and enjoyed this tale. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
themaneloco
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Aug 1, 2006 |
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Very nice. I personally enjoyed the first chapter with the sisters the most but it has remained solid throughout. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Millie
(Edit) (Aug 2, 2006)
- Thank you very much. I have another story in the works. Hope you will enjoy that too.
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| Reviewer:
Serenissima
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Jul 12, 2006 |
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Excellent (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Millie
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2006)
- Thank you for the high rating, I am glad you are enjoying the story.
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| Reviewer:
adeadeasyone
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Jul 6, 2006 |
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Really looking forward to more chapters. Very enjoyable (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Millie
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2006)
- Thank you, and thank you also for the high rating. There is more to come.
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| Reviewer:
pixie_dust
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Jul 6, 2006 |
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Well written. I look forward to reading how the relationship progresses. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Millie
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2006)
- Thank you. I hope that it will progress in a way that you enjoy.
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jul 5, 2006 |
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Well written, exiting situations. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Millie
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2006)
- Thank you, and thank you for your high rating. I appreciate both that and your kind words.
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Jul 1, 2006 |
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Over all quite nice. The writing, especially at the beginning needs some improvement. I'm looking forward to new installments. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Millie
(Edit) (Jul 1, 2006)
- Thank you for your review, the next chapter has been posted and is in the queue somewhere. How would you improve the beginning?
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| Reviewer:
SmittyTheBlasphemer
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Jun 29, 2006 |
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While I enjoyed the content of the story, the writing itself lacks real cogency and coherency in many places. This is most notable at the beginning of the story.
The potential is there, but this story isn't quite what it could be. Keep working at it. :) (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Millie
(Edit) (Jun 30, 2006)
- I will keep working at it, I hope you will keep reading.
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| Reviewer:
Lisa Jones
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Jun 29, 2006 |
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Excellent start, you really get into Martin's mind. I can't wait to read more. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Millie
(Edit) (Jun 30, 2006)
- Thank you. I will post more very soon.
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| Reviewer:
sampit
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Jun 29, 2006 |
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Great story and very nice style. So much looking forward to reading next parts. Hope things get more humiliating. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Millie
(Edit) (Jun 29, 2006)
- Thank you. I hope you will enjoy the forthcoming chapters.
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Jun 28, 2006 |
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A wonderfully fervid piece of writing. Exaggerated, but somehow compellingly honest in its depiction of desire that becomes a need one is willing to do anything to satisfy. Really look forward to more of this story. Nice setup with the neighbor floors below. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Millie
(Edit) (Jun 29, 2006)
- Thank you for your kind words. I will post the next chapter by the weekend.
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| Reviewer:
mlallen
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Jun 28, 2006 |
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I thought the subject matter was well written (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Millie
(Edit) (Jun 29, 2006)
- Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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