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Remote Control Love Slave
Author: Depr@ved
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(Added on Jun 26, 2006)
(This month 138412 readers) (Total 215024 readers) |
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A well to do man sends his step daughter off to a clinic for some extreme modifications, turning her into a remote control sex slave. Her mother is led to believe she was sent to a girls school to learn manners and dicipline |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
PaladinDD
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Dec 4, 2008 |
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Wow, what a great idea! I loved the clinic / training part and the part at home with her parents. Wonder how that went on with mom knowing :-) Would be great to have more stories surrounding that idea (are there?) or a continuation of this one (9/10)
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Mothbrad
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Aug 6, 2007 |
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Love the story - a great investigation into how technology is improving our world so rapidly. Nice humiliation scenes, and not too many boring parts. Don't know if the story is dead, but I wouldn't mind seeing more of this in the future. (9/10)
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viktor
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Aug 18, 2006 |
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One of my top-5 stories!! I'm daily checking this site to catch the next part!! (10/10)
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Olokun
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Jul 23, 2006 |
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Pretty good. There's great potential here. (8/10)
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geoff
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Jul 17, 2006 |
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IDCrew got it pretty much right - avoid getting into repetition and you will have a very good story going. Get a good proof reader and you'll have a great story! (8/10)
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IDCrewDawg
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Jul 16, 2006 |
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There are some spelling and gramar errors throuought, and though somewhat distracting, doesn't reduce the overall rating of the story. I enjoy the direction it's taking, but I see the potential for repetitive chapters to begin if the author is not carefull. I anticipate the next installment. (8/10)
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Nikolaj
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Jul 13, 2006 |
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The story is good, but some things like she is doing in school... I am surprised why master force her in bathroom. Anyway I am waiting for the next part. (9/10)
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H Dean
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Jul 12, 2006 |
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Quite an interesting idea and one which I like. I've been toying with the notion of something similar, in fact. the trouble is that it is far too easily done and I find no real mood in this story. Consequently, I wasn't terribly interested in what happened, despite my interest in the topic. Finally, as has been mentioned already, there are quite a few technical deficientcies in this story. These did hurt the flow. However, the main trouble - and main reason this did not receive a higher mark from me - was a lack of mood or feel. The story just didn't have kick. (6/10)
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La Toya
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Jul 6, 2006 |
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Will the Idea and the start were good, I keep getting put off by the misspelling of the word cum (6/10)
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geoff
(Edit) (Jul 17, 2006)
- Amazing - first time I've ever seen a misspelt review that complained of misspelling in a story - or have you spelt "will" correctly but used it instead of "well"? Either way ........
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heycarrieanne
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Jul 5, 2006 |
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It is not COMB--that is what you use on your hair! It is CUM! (5/10)
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mkemse
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Jun 27, 2006 |
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all you stuff is great (9/10)
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Nayatic
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Jun 27, 2006 |
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well told and interesting. I look forward to further installments. (8/10)
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