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Indian girls are innocent
Author: Steven Douglas
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(Added on Jun 22, 2006)
(This month 115182 readers) (Total 180939 readers) |
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An overseas Indian man marries a beautiful Indian girl who was born and brought up in an Indian village. He has to teach her the basics of sex and its pleasure. He then gradually imposes restrictions on her and corresponding punishments to preserve her obedience and conservative attitude. Meantime, her sister also comes to live with them and she is disciplined and forced to submit as a training process to continue to be good after her marriage. Her sister is also used for BDSM experiments by the husband and wife. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Alphahelix
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Nov 27, 2008 |
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Seems to take a long time to get going, and the English is poor.
However, there's a lot of creativity in the humiliations devised in the second half. (Might want to begin reading at part 3, in fact.)
All in all, a very nice misogynistic tale. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
geoff
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Jun 29, 2006 |
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A struggle to come up with a score here. Storyline is very good but language skills drag it back. If you want to write in the English language then you really need to get a native English speaker as a proof reader. (5/10)
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