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Slave Sharon
Author: Michelle Makens
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(Added on Jun 18, 2006)
(This month 50387 readers) (Total 71095 readers) |
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A younger then middle age woman allows herself to become a (nc?) lesbian sex slave to her attractive female employer |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (8/10) |
Lowest
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Jun 22, 2006 |
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I liked it. Thought it well written, a little florid for my tastes but still highly descriptive. Had a distance to it, as a memory, which kept it from being narratively highly erotic, but still, as a memory piece, well done. Look forward to other contributions. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jun 21, 2006 |
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The story itself is not bad, however it is written as in a diary. More action and conversations would improve it a lot. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Jun 21, 2006 |
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The writing is stilted, there is an obvious lack
of proof-reading (or even spell-checking), the
characters are completely undeveloped, etc.,
etc. It gets a 3 because there are far worse
stories posted here. (3/10)
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