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Wonder Woman: Hell in Paradise (Part 2)
Author: DarthSaad
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(Added on Jun 18, 2006)
(This month 274230 readers) (Total 434061 readers) |
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Continuing the tale of the invasion of Paradise Island by a group of villains. As they continue to further their secret agenda, they take the chance to ruthlessly use and abuse the captive Amazons. And they have the chance for seeking revenge against the female heroes they have captured, including the most famous, powerful, and beautiful of all - Wonder Woman! |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 6, 2008 |
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1 of the very few Super Hero type stories posted worth the time to read
I re-read the story, here is your 1st 10, congrats (10/10)
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- Replied by:
darthsaad
(Edit) (Jan 1, 2008)
- Thanks very much - but dont be shy of offering advice. I continue to chase that elusive 10/10 score and am happy to hear from people about how they think the story could be improved [unless it is regarding typos - my own personal kryptonite]. Seriously, let me know your thought, and thanks again. Darth
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redlion0414
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Oct 17, 2007 |
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just read the whole story...couldnt stop...awesome (10/10)
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- Replied by:
darthsaad
(Edit) (Jan 1, 2008)
- Thanks RL. I am glad you have been enjoying the story and hope the most recent updates have continued to satisfy. Darth
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jethro jodhpur
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Aug 28, 2007 |
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In case you're wondering why there have been no new postings, blame it on Rabbit 1 who had the nerve to die on Saturday without Tiger's permission. This is not a sick joke, it's fact! (8/10)
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chksng19
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Aug 9, 2007 |
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violent and harsh, the tale tells of the woes of Wonder Woman, to the delight of we lucky enough to read it. Nicely written, Darth, and each addition makes us anxious for the next.
update 5-8: Fine continuing story. I'm too old (snicker) to know of some of the characters from comics after my time, but excellent storytelling helps us understand and know them.
Thanks for your continuing efforts!
08-09 And the surprise of surprises: the story does not get weaker or repetitive, as so many long tales do. You've got yourself a continuing winner... and a wonderful imagination! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
darthsaad
(Edit) (Jul 17, 2006)
- Thanks, and I hope your anxiety was at least somewhat releived by parts 3 and 4 :) Stay tuned for more
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darthsaad
(Edit) (Dec 17, 2006)
- Yes, I was mortified at the number of mistakes. I had been extremely busy and thought I had got them all, but in my haste to post after a long delay I was not careful enough. I have reposted the chapter and hopefully they will replace the old error filled version with the new one, which should be error free [or at least error lite].
Thanks for you continued patronage - glad your enjoying it.
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darthsaad
(Edit) (Dec 17, 2006)
- More to come soon, I hope.
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Firestorm87
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Jul 3, 2007 |
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I just read this story and I like it a lot! It's good to see that people still use the caracters of DC comics! The plot is very good and you have used a lot of fantasy. A little request - can yu put a bit more of Deathstroke in your story?
I hope you update soon! (9/10)
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Mothbrad
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Apr 6, 2007 |
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Great great story that puts the rather wimpy damsel in distress themes of some of the old superhero comics etc to shame. When are you going to do a Star Wars themed story, Darth? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
darthsaad
(Edit) (Apr 6, 2007)
- Thanks MB. I too an not fond of wimpy DID's and am glad your enjoying the story.
If you like the idea of my kind of story in the Star Wars univers, may I suggest you check out the novel 'Star by Star' in the new Jedi Order series - chapter 21 has a group of the young Jedi, including Jaina Solo, half naked and being tortured by the sadistic alien Yuzhann Vong. As for myself, I would love to find some time to do a story featuring a yound Leia and Mara Jade, when I am finished with Wonder Woman and company. Maybe you have some suggestions :)
Thanks again - DS
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Devilsharvest
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Feb 24, 2007 |
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As i say to Part one . This story is awesome . Many different Victims , i promise you that you donīt get bored.I like the Style and the Theme. (10/10)
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Curtis
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Jul 19, 2006 |
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You're getting better at this. It's interesting that the parts you do your best work on are the chapters without Wonder Woman. Chapters three and four of this current part would rate a '10' if considered seperately. You obviously know your DC history better than I do, in fact. I have Wonder Woman comics individually back to the late sixties and a complete run from about 1978 to the present, but I have no memory of the Sangtee. Could you tell me when they appeared? (8/10)
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- Replied by:
darthsaad
(Edit) (Jul 26, 2006)
- Thanks Curtis - the Sangtee appeared between issues 60 and 70, I think in the early 90's, with the Bolland covers. They were orignally called the Kreel but this changed 1 issue later. They were a minor plot in the leadup to Artemis becoming the new [temporary] Wonder Woman.
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Masterdudemind
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Jul 18, 2006 |
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Awesome story. I love the use of Huntress and Canary as leverage. Any chance you could throw in the Asian Batgirl too? (10/10)
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darthsaad
(Edit) (Jul 26, 2006)
- Thanks dude :) I too am enjoying the Huntress/Canary/Oracle situation, and I hope the upcoming chapters continue to please. As for the new Batgirl I must admit I know little of this character beyond her appearances in Birds of Prey, but she seems like she would be a worthy addition to our cast [And dont worry, I haven't forgotten Zinda aka Lady Blackhawk either.]
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Faibhar
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Jul 16, 2006 |
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Like "susankarl" I have not read other parts of your story, save the last, but I do find you have a good grasp of dialogue and story developement.
Faibhar (9/10)
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darthsaad
(Edit) (Jul 17, 2006)
- Wow - thanks Faibhar - your stories of amazon suffering have been a source of pleasure and inspiration to me for years, so this is a big thrill to hear you give my work such praise, and motivation for me to work even harder in the future [if such fun story writing can be called work] :)
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| Reviewer:
susankarl
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Jun 26, 2006 |
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I have not read any other parts of your story, but after enjoying your cruel use of mother and daughter suffering to gain control of a prisoner, I look forward to more.
It is only a shame that you submitted the story with such a short taster of the delights to come. Susan. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
darthsaad
(Edit) (Jun 27, 2006)
- Thanks for taking the time to leave feedback Susan. I'm glad your enjoying the story. Looking back I see I could have made a begger deal of the mother/daughter scenario, especially since I was so pleased with the visual image of the torture. But I guess I had in my mind that people had said they really wanted to see Diana in the spotlight, so I kept the other brief so I could devote more energy to the star of the show. I just posted the second chapter last night, so I expect it will be on soon. Hopefully it will make up for the brevity of the opening. If people are interested I will certainly go back and revisit Tasha and Mishka as the story goes on, and I have plans for a flashback chapter featuring Tasha and Diana in the Sangtee slave camp. Stay tuned ;)
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