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Jessica\'s Tale
Author: Depr@ved
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(Added on Jun 8, 2006)
(This month 24903 readers) (Total 43553 readers) |
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Two twin sisters find themselves in a real life house of horrors, after being kidnapped from their own home |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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May 21, 2007 |
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Lovely cruel story that deserves to be read. Very Non-PC, but so far as I know, that's not an official crime yet. (8/10)
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seamusduggery
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Jun 30, 2006 |
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I have to disagree with all three of these reviews. The story does border upon insanity but that doesn't mean the author is nuts. What it does mean is he has the ability to get into the story and think like a mad man. Depr@ved is no more crazy than Dean Koontz or Stephen King. You're a talented writer my friend. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
byutiful
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Jun 22, 2006 |
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I think BDSM is a very enjoyable lifestyle for some. But this story borders on insanity and anyone who heads there needs to get his or her head checked. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
virginpussy
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Jun 14, 2006 |
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I feel the same way. I thought it had no substance, didn't even get me wet and quite frankly was pretty sick. But you do have potential. Don't give up. (1/10)
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chksng19
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Jun 9, 2006 |
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Did the story get any proofreading? Lots of wrong words, divided words, etc.
The story is not very good, as the main character shows no reasons for what he does. It's all random. Seems to be a simple violent tale, with no real story line. (3/10)
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- Replied by:
seamusduggery
(Edit) (Jun 30, 2006)
- The main character is obviously disturbed. It's not often that insane people establish reasons for doing things. Although it would be nice for the reader to have some of the offender's past, it's not a requirement. The spelling was a bit out of uniform, but the story surely deserves more credit than what you've given it.
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