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The Test
Author: Sardonicus
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(Added on Jun 8, 2006)
(This month 55624 readers) (Total 71953 readers) |
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A prisoner of war is tested to see if he is worthy of not becoming a work slave. He is not happy with the results |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
bullfinch
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Apr 7, 2008 |
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well described torture (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
DungeonMaster6
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Jul 1, 2006 |
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This had to be a fantasy; I can't imagine any man getting paddled in the balls that many times. I do agree with some other reviews. The pace needs to slow down a bit. But it's indeed an imaginative story and I hope there's more. (8/10)
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trainmanretep
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Jun 13, 2006 |
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Could have used a bit more character development.
A very interesting twist at the end. He sure got snuckered. I'd like read about some of those experiments that are in his future (7/10)
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abitbent
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Jun 10, 2006 |
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Great short story.. very imaginative, good writing skills. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
eeven
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Jun 9, 2006 |
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good ball beating (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jun 9, 2006 |
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A fair start for a SF based story (might put that in your descriptors -- and this is fiction, not "real"). Pretty well written, but the pain parts are almost rushed through, as are the attendants' visits. Slow down, describe them more richly, complicate them a bit. Your readers will thank you. (7/10)
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Anneya
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Jun 9, 2006 |
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Very nice. I would have liked a little more background information but the rest was great. (7/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Jun 8, 2006 |
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Not a bad start to the story. Characters could have been developed a bit better though. (7/10)
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