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The Adventures of Jack and Jill
Author: rolf palsy
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(Added on Jun 7, 2006)
(This month 124330 readers) (Total 203449 readers) |
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The trials and tribulations of orphaned teenage twins who fall into the hands of one group of perverts after another as they make their way to adulthood. Beware, this story has absolutly no redeeming qualities, nor are any intended. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
s1xer
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Mar 3, 2016 |
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Enthralling (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 7, 2007 |
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well done a nice mixed of almost everything (9/10)
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- Replied by:
rolf palsy
(Edit) (Feb 8, 2007)
- You are amazing! Where do you get the time? Your review and generous rating are very much appreciated. There is more to this story and it will be posted shortly.
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Jun 10, 2006 |
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The story was very well written despite I am not much into the underage incest. Overall the story was a very good read. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
rolf palsy
(Edit) (Sep 2, 2006)
- Sorry to overlook your review for so long. It just fell through the crack, what else can I say? Authors depend upon reviewers such as yourself to give us some guidance on what we are doing right as well as wrong, and your input is truly appreciated. I trust you are continuing to follow the adventures of Jack and Jill.
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| Reviewer:
Sonia_Masters
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Jun 10, 2006 |
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I really enjoyed this and I hope we will see more chapters very soon. The incest angle is great and the milking of Jack really turned me on. Great! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
rolf palsy
(Edit) (Jun 10, 2006)
- Thanks for the generous review; glad that you are enjoying the story so far. Be advised that there is more, much more, of the adventures of this pair of orphans in the storm. The next installment should be submitted in two weeks.
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