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Debbie, Crane driver
Author: obohobo
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(Added on Jun 4, 2006)
(This month 10464 readers) (Total 20456 readers) |
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Debbie finds that getting to the top in a man\'s profession can be a difficult and painful experience. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
longrover
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Jun 23, 2006 |
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My first since being away too long, but I couldn't miss obohobo. I agree with the comments on paragraph length, and there's not much of the kind of action usually found here, but I liked the plot, think Debbie one of the most interesting characters I've met in quite a while, and things were fast and furious once they started! Perhaps best of all, obhobo has stretched once more. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Delaquoi
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Jun 6, 2006 |
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I really enjoyed this. Okay all my favorite perversions weren't there, but great to read something that's real and still sexy too. The characters I recognised and loved. (9/10)
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barbod
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Jun 6, 2006 |
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Good story albeit long but once you are into the story it flows nicely and the ending is brill! (9/10)
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kemosabe
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Jun 6, 2006 |
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Gimme a B! Gimme a D! Gimme an S! Gimme an M! (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Jun 5, 2006 |
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This was a very good story. Yes, some paragraphs were to long. Over all a good story, and would like to see more (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 5, 2006 |
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nothing that grabs one in this (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jun 4, 2006 |
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This might have been a great story, but I got lost in the paragraphs that were a mile long and gave up! (5/10)
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