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A Descent Into Slavery
Author: 26maple
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(Added on May 31, 2006)
(This month 11629 readers) (Total 31958 readers) |
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The tale of how I went from being a normal member of society, into nothing more than a slave for anyone |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 2, 2007 |
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the story by idea is good it needs work more description, more interaction and you should have made it M/f it would have been more enjoyable but this is an authors choice
Also please check you codes they need adjustments in thr storyline (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
magnum
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Jun 1, 2006 |
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Writing was actually fine, but unhappy about the M/f designation. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
chattel69
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May 31, 2006 |
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Was disappointed to find it was a F/m story. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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May 31, 2006 |
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You might could improve this somehow with better writing, but I am not sure. One thing for sure, you need to learn the difference between M/f and F/m--the guy in this story was not dominant. (4/10)
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