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Service to Namor
Author: VonStephen
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(Added on May 28, 2006)
(This month 66817 readers) (Total 83325 readers) |
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The first American civil war brought an end to slavery.--During the aftermath of the second, it would be reborn.--Namor, an empire carved out by force in what was once the United States. Solving social problems one at a time the founder managed to destroy the fiat money system, return his nation to a democratic republic, reestablish the rights of property owners, bring on a new age of feudalism, and make it legal to purchase slaves from the block.--Confused?-----Then read on. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
nillasslave
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Oct 24, 2014 |
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i have a feeling that Savious becomes a Lord and when he's rich enough he goes to Von Hession's castle and sees Anastasia there...Anastasia also sees him...how could she forget him? after all Savious was the one who took her cherry
but thats just speculation (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 28, 2009 |
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With me, Von starts off on the wrong foot because of his surmise we wouldn't be able to grasp the content of his synopsys. I mean, it's not quantum physics, is it?
Furthermore, the story reads like a mix of "Gone With The Wind", the training part of "Full Metal Jacket" with some snippets from "Star Wars", "Roots" and other not so well defined scenarios... Okay, so I'm a movie-buff, what can you do.
To be honest, the whole premise works. To some extent.
At the same time, the different genres seem to clash at times, making it feel like the story was re-written a couple of times to adapt to new ideas, new time-settings.
But I still liked the whole kaboodle enough to add an erected "ad-infinitum" sign... That's an eight, to those ill-informed.
JJ (8/10)
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cece3457
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Feb 3, 2008 |
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i can't wait for more installments! (10/10)
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Satan_Klaus
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Feb 6, 2007 |
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What I like especially about this story is the background. You can really feel that the author has put thought into it and it makes it so much easier to slip into this world of sensual slavery. (9/10)
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gentleman
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Jun 3, 2006 |
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Excellent. Well-written, with lots of kneeling naked slavegirls. But Anastasia's story is so much more interesting than the soldier's! I look forward to more chapters as she becomes the good slut her Master sees in her. (9/10)
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Rocky
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May 30, 2006 |
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An interesting, provocative story that makes me want to continue reading it. Very good work, perhaps worthy of a 10, but let's see how future chapters are. (9/10)
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peachy
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May 30, 2006 |
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Good read,
thank you (9/10)
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