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Collecting the Debt
Author: sonofmasoch
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(Added on May 25, 2006)
(This month 19674 readers) (Total 44555 readers) |
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Two Female Debt collectors on there way to El Paso are captured by a Mexican woman and her two daughters |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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May 26, 2006 |
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I agree with the other reviewers, this story is just to short to review. (4/10)
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slaveneedledick
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May 25, 2006 |
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I agree with the other reviewer that the story was actually to short to really review. (5/10)
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mkemse
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May 25, 2006 |
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need to see more to pass good judgement and the storyneeds spell checking real bad (5/10)
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kemosabe
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May 25, 2006 |
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Despite a multitude of typos and poor grammer, the premise of the story is good. Too short to really appraise at this point. I'll reserve judgement for future posts.
Incidently, Fort Worth is two words, not one (5/10)
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