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Marks
Author: hids
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(Added on May 19, 2006)
(This month 13950 readers) (Total 27516 readers) |
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A mundane job interview takes an unexpected detour . . . |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Mabus_ut
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Jul 3, 2006 |
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Written in a style similar to my own. A few kinks (ha) in the chronology, as mentioned earlier, but I see much potential. I like the abrupt ending; it allows the encounter to be open ended, and invites the reader's imagination to wander. (9/10)
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jip
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Jun 21, 2006 |
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Description is excellent, however story stops on the moment it should start. Suspect it is only part 1. (note that the story is added a second time? (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Aussiegirl1
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May 20, 2006 |
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Well done hids, you painted a great image and I could feel her frustration. Are you planning to continue or was it just a one off story. There was some confusion over the marks ( as stated in the previous review), but that did not take away from the main purpose of the story. As a fellow author, I know how easy it is to let a slip up like that happen. Keep up the good work. (8/10)
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bigcat
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May 19, 2006 |
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Well done. Good tension, inner life, with a quiet, suspenseful erotic air. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lisa Jones
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May 19, 2006 |
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Great story, very atmospheric and very well written. I have only one quibble, if she hadn't seen 'him' in months - as you say in the third paragraph from the end - how come she's got 'bright red marks aginst her skin' which implies a recent beating, in the first paragraph - or am I missing something? (8/10)
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chattel69
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May 19, 2006 |
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I wish I could have an interview like this... I might even be able to get a job this way (8/10)
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