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Martha and Paul
Author: Carmenica Diaz
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(Added on May 18, 2006)
(This month 53821 readers) (Total 84459 readers) |
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A tale of subtle female domination. Martha decides that paul should be taught a lesson. Martha got what she wanted and Paul…well, Paul got some things. A complete short story by the Mistress of Femdom. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
julietvuk
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Jul 1, 2008 |
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A very clever story that needs to be continued with Martha trapping Paul into a femdom relationship. The plot is well developed and the storyline so far is convincing. (8/10)
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kinkcrazy
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Mar 27, 2007 |
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Not much substance, more of a tease (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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May 19, 2006 |
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great tease and denial story. Would be even better is the fellow would wind up with a chastity belt. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
slavetoby
(Edit) (Mar 15, 2007)
- A really good story, I hope since Martha has him trained there will be more. This is a great start to a complete femdom relationship. Please keep it going
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