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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
(Edit) |
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Apr 8, 2007 |
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A gratuitously cruel story, not that there's anything wrong with that. I thought that while the action was quite mundane, and the characters not exactly expansive, it was worth reading. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
his_nymph
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May 23, 2006 |
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Not enough descriptive details, and what is there uses extremely repetative language-- e.g. "piston jerked" 3+ times to describe the motion. Or, Shana "gaaked," whatever that is supposed to mean. Interesting concept, curious for the backstories, but really this needs a very good edit and polish. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
kaleun76
(Edit) |
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May 20, 2006 |
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Yes, you should post the whole series.
I liked the story. Only downside is that it drops you in it, without any clue as to where it comes from. Not that it is bad, but it does seem a lot is missing by the way it's told. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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May 17, 2006 |
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My legs are still crossed, so you caught my attention! But, it would be nice to have some background on the story and the people involved. I guess I like to know the motivation as to why the man wants to hurt the girl. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Sigmund Freud
(Edit) (May 18, 2006)
- Thanks! There is backstory to this, actually. I should really post the whole dang series :)
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