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The Torment of JAG
Author: dr_midnite
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(Added on May 15, 2006)
(This month 61737 readers) (Total 129611 readers) |
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Based on the TV show JAG.-----6 of the females from JAG are captured, tortured, raped and abused by a Navy Seal that was falsely convicted of rape because of them. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
robyn
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Sep 5, 2006 |
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Hope you gone to post more i wish it was me in the story (8/10)
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RhondaLee
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Jul 17, 2006 |
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A good choice of choosing a forgotten TV series. (9/10)
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subgirl
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Jul 12, 2006 |
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this story made me squirm in my computer chair. Very imaginative, and well put together...and let me say...with dr. midnites imagination...for Him i would be a very very good girl...would NOT want to be on His bad side...lol Hope You have more installments soon. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Good_Grip
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Jun 8, 2006 |
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This is one of the best stories I've read on this site. The plot and descriptions are top notch. I love a modification story. I'm waiting with great anticipation to see what will happen next and to the rest of the girls. Before I give a top rating I'd like to see a few more chapters. And please finish it, even if it takes awhile. Don't abandon it. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jun 8, 2006 |
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Not knowing the show at all may be a little handicap, as I can't picture the women you mention. None the less, the story is pretty good, and the writing is good as well. Might want to check some of the tenses of your verbs, and check for wrong words here and there.
Second chapter is an improvement, and the story is getting hotter. Score adjusted upwards. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Jun 7, 2006 |
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I am not a big fan of spooofs but this one to me was well written, flows well and nicely done amd I found it HOT.
On a rare occasion I find a realy good story and i re read it and re rate it, so i am chaging the rating on thisfrom 9 to 10, to me anyway based on the action in the story I find it soarching hot, but everyone has different tastes, this is based on my own taste
I hope to see amny more chapters soon (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
magnum
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May 19, 2006 |
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I thoroughly enjoyed Harriett's whipping. I really look forward to a continuation of the series! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Von Schmiser
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May 17, 2006 |
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very nice story. While not being a regular viewer of this show I admit that I thought of "playing" with some of the ladies myself,some of them are quite hot. I would most likely be a bit rougher. Please conntinue! (6/10)
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bagles
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May 16, 2006 |
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I find this story very hot and interesting. It flow very well and keeps you intruged i give it so far a 9/10. I hope this keep up with what has started an just dose not fall off the plant (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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May 15, 2006 |
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Not much on spoofs but the story line was very good. (7/10)
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