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Jodi\'s Fitness Training
Author: jodi
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(Added on May 14, 2006)
(This month 11365 readers) (Total 24766 readers) |
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Submissive CD is put through humiliation fitness training |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5/10) |
| Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jun 21, 2006 |
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This is a difficult one. The idea behind the story is interesting, but the way it is worked out is questionable. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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May 21, 2006 |
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While a 6 is "Somewhat enjoyable. Acceptable writing skills", this is "Somewhat enjoyable despite unacceptable writing skills". As other reviewers noted, the apparent fear of paragraphs, the him/her pronoun issue, and odd tenses of verbs detract from the innate erotic nature of the story. However, kudos for discrete public bondage, and public humiliation! (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
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May 18, 2006 |
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Hard to read. No attention to paragraphs. Every sentence either began with the word Mistress or Jodi. The author has a good imagination, but he just needs to learn how to express it better. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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May 15, 2006 |
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The story did not flow well. The plot seemed to be a good plot but development story telling lacked. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
chattel69
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May 14, 2006 |
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The flow of the story was interupted with the switching back and forth in referring to him and her, which is it. I liked the idea of the story but lost interest in trying to read the format (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 14, 2006 |
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not my type theme but i enjoyed the story anyway, but i did feel bad for Jodi (7/10)
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