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Paula the Equestrian
Author: Teemu
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(Added on May 11, 2006)
(This month 19320 readers) (Total 37232 readers) |
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A girl totally enslaves an older man with her teenage friends. He is trained to be a breeding pony in the hands of his beautiful, young tormentors. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5/10) |
| Average
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| Reviewer:
hb59
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Jan 4, 2011 |
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Nice story! However, I was waiting for something to happen... (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
playful
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Nov 3, 2007 |
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i really liked the story and would like to read more... perhaps in chapter 2 there will be an enema, as in the keywords? ;-) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Wistan
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May 14, 2006 |
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A good premise, and the author has the pacing right. I'm looking forward to seeing how this will turn out in future parts.
As others note, it reads like it was written by someone for whom English is a second language. I certainly didn't find it hard to read as such, I could always tell what the writer *meant* to say, it's just a bit offputting. I strongly suggest that the author seeks a proof reader for future installments. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Custard Fan
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May 14, 2006 |
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This is great start, I look out for part 2 (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
gideon
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May 14, 2006 |
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This is a promising opening chapter: I look forward to reading the next (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
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May 13, 2006 |
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Ideas are creative, but I suspect this author's first language isn't English. Hard to read. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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May 12, 2006 |
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A slow part 1. As the other reviewer said, more erotic should be better. Will perhaps review different after part 2 (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 12, 2006 |
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hard to read and what there is simply is not good, nothing erotic at all (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
methuen
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May 12, 2006 |
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Difficult to read. (2/10)
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