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Subgirl The Rape Mistress
Author: somedude
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(Added on May 4, 2006)
(This month 49020 readers) (Total 59209 readers) |
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The head slave trainer of the secret slavers, the Society of the Plucked Rose had her friend kidnapped to become her newest slave! |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Apr 11, 2010 |
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i agree with ThisGirl and chksng19. Try and write some about these two, but let us see a bit more about them, how did they meet, how the Domme come to join the Plucked Rose, how did the Plucked Rose start.
This sort of info can turn a boring, unbelieveable story into something with some life and being more believeable. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
ThisGirl
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May 6, 2006 |
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The idea of the underground d/s society has good potential that was never expounded on throughout the story. Also, the characters and their relationship to one another are very shalllow. And so I must agree with chsng19 that what we have here is a trite remake of the "unwilling slave tale". The writing structure was good, however: correct grammar and spelling were used for the most part. Keep trying, somedude. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
submiss
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May 6, 2006 |
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Nice Read Wish There Were More. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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May 5, 2006 |
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Just another "unwilling new slave" tale, with nothing special to make it any different. The whip is called a "tawse", by the way. (5/10)
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