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Schedules
Author: Abe Froman
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(Added on May 1, 2006)
(This month 51655 readers) (Total 62743 readers) |
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Could what we fear the most actually provide the freedom we desperately crave? Do we work so hard to guard our secrets only to hope they are discovered? A busy submissive finds out. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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May 8, 2006 |
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A little more detail of the goings on before the surprise would have been good, but certainly the story was enjoyable. I'm looking forward to a sequel. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
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May 4, 2006 |
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Well written, even for the Sausage King of Chicago. A little more description of the play would have been nice, however the dynamic between the characters is intensely evident. I hope these small snippets of beginnings continue on into bigger works. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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May 3, 2006 |
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Have to agree with the others. I hope to read more in the future. (7/10)
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Anneya
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May 2, 2006 |
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I liked the ending, it surprised me and that doesn't often happen. I would have liked a little more detail of the teasing and torment, but as the previous reviewer said it was well written and enjoyable. (7/10)
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Wistan
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May 2, 2006 |
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Good story, worth a read. It's a short one, and the first half or so could do with fleshing out a bit - I felt like I was being teased, but in a good way! It's well written, and although short the characters come to life well. The twist is an interesting and quite original one, you have to feel sorry for how the poor guy ends up! (7/10)
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