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Lisa Learns to Love
Author: Lisa Jones
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(Added on Apr 27, 2006)
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Lisa, a young woman setting out in life, is taken in by an older woman who teaches her pain and pleasure |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Dec 10, 2011 |
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One of the best stories I've ever read! Lisa Jones is fabulous...read everything she writes...you'll be glad you did! (10/10)
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rocketXpert
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Feb 21, 2011 |
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I've gotten misty-eyed reading the endings of "Stable Boy," "Lisa Learns to Love," and "Step by Step." This is a very erotic story, but I think the emotional connection between the characters is what really puts this in a class of its own.
I can't help thinking Christine might have been hoping Lisa and Judy would make a good match at the start of the story. If so, she got incredibly lucky, since I don't see how she could have known that Lisa was even a lesbian, let alone into all the same kinky stuff as Judy. Feminine intuition maybe? Or maybe I'm just reading too much into it.
Another little side note: I noticed that both Lisa in this story and Helen in "Step by Step" have an unseen Aunt Josie. Makes me wonder if it's the same aunt, which would mean the two characters are related. It would be interesting to say the least if they ever met at a family reunion or whatever and compared notes on the unexpected and somewhat similar directions their lives had taken. (10/10)
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xSoCalCynicx
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Jan 26, 2011 |
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Excellent balance of character development and erotocism - a great story, with characters that hold the reader's interest beyond the description of their kink. (10/10)
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Dryhill
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Apr 6, 2010 |
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Thanks again for another great story (all 7 chapters). It would be nice to have some "one-off" events about all the charaters, not forgetting "Babes" and what happens to her in Cambridge.
i love your writing, all charaters are beliveable and well fleshed out. Your attention to spelling and grammar are what really makes your stories that bit more special to read. To take a few words from that great author Charles Dickins "can i have some more please?" (10/10)
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Exocet
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Mar 26, 2010 |
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Very good story with nice development. Only the rather twee ending detracted from it slightly.
I particularly liked the narratives about the other participants and how they'd met up.
So lots of variety, a good flow, and very sexy throughout. Many thanks! (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 16, 2009 |
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Another deliciously wicked tale. Great develoment of characters and storyline.
JJ (9/10)
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Froggys'angel
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Dec 22, 2008 |
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Very believable and well written. I hope to read more that you have written. Thanks for a great story :) Also, quite a turn on to read :) (9/10)
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suissepervert
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Dec 2, 2008 |
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Yes, that sounds like a conclusion. I think that end came a bit sudden. Nevertheless a great story. (9/10)
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onewhoadores
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Nov 24, 2008 |
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A fitting and satisfying, if long overdue, conclusion to a wonderful D/s love story. Well done, Lisa (10/10)
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dadisch
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Apr 21, 2008 |
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I have just finished this story & I loved it! The whole storyline was believable & I do love it when a nice girl is slowly seduced into lesbian domination. I am just about to start reading the rest of your catalogue. Well done Lisa. (10/10)
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NinaH
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Apr 17, 2008 |
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Hi Lisa, again I must say a beautiful story and one whicj can be read in onnce. I was so excited and aroused, you are a wonderful author and you can create settings that are humiliating and degrading for the slave. Thank you, hope to read much more from you! (9/10)
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azrlg17
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Nov 27, 2006 |
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Nice, I had to laugh at how Ruth and Jane met :-)
Good grammar and spelling, believable characters and plot. (8/10)
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Perrin
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Jul 30, 2006 |
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Very good. Nice changes of partners and scenery. Good read and quite long. Worth the time. (9/10)
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Master John+
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May 11, 2006 |
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This story let's me think of the story of Janet. This also was a story which hit me wright away.
Perhaps you could consider to extend the number of caracters.
I really enjoyed reading it so fare. The is plausible, might be realistic and very exciting.
If hope you have the courage and time to continue this story, I am conviced that it will make a lot off people happy. I whish you a lot of courage and a clear mind. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lisa Jones
(Edit) (May 12, 2006)
- John
Many thanks for your review
Chapter IV is alreay written and will be posted in the next few days. There's a delay while I proof read it, and the admins on BDSM Library are busy people so they may hold it up for a day or two. Be patient and you'll find that the cast does increase so I anticipated your request!
There's plenty more to come.
Thanks again.
Lisa
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Anneya
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May 9, 2006 |
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I am really enjoying this story, everything about it draws me in and makes me impatient for more. Thank you for sharing. (9/10)
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Tcheena3
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Apr 28, 2006 |
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Wholeheartedly agree with Rilawild. Well written, well paced, very hot. You can't keep us waiting too long for the next installment. If writing's harder work than you thought, then you'll just have to put in more hours in the day, won't you? :)
I especially liked Judy's last thought... raises some interesting possibilities! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lisa Jones
(Edit) (May 3, 2006)
- It's not just the writing, it's the proof reading. The spell checker is one thing but it doesn't help with grammar and phrasing. I often have to rewrite quite large sections. I tend to get a bit carried away as I type! I'm sure I checked every word three times and I'm still ashamed of the many mistakes that crept in. Still, I've just posted part 2 and started on part 3. I hope they live up to expectations.
P.S. I've changed my forum name from 'Slothie' to match my 'nom de plume'
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rilawild
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Apr 27, 2006 |
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I really enjoyed this story. It was well written and nicely paced. I would love to hear more of Lisa's adventures with Judy, and see how far she takes her. The set up was nicely executed with some lovely foreshadowing of what was to come. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Slothie
(Edit) (Apr 27, 2006)
- Thanks
There's lots more to come. We've hardly met Christine yet, and where does Judy go on Friday evenings?
I may take a while before part two arrives - writing turns out to be harder work than I thought
Lisa
P.S. The photographer's party is one of the best stories on the site
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