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The Slave girl school
Author: Cecilita
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(Added on Apr 24, 2006)
(This month 52244 readers) (Total 102248 readers) |
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Tina (20 y o) is blindly in Love with Micke, but he want to break up with her. In dastardliness he wants it to be her fault. To gain time he makes her believe that a friend of him has a training-school for slave girls. He’s intend is a try to scare her away, but she “voluntarily” agrees to register (check-in) as a trainee (student) at the “school” to be a perfect slave for her Master Micke. This evil plot is just a way for Micke to break up with her, promising her that he would take her back again after her exam. But will he? He had met another girl, Ulrika. Will Tina ever pass? Her trainer is an oversexed 52 y o man. |
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| Reviewer:
peter10b
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Aug 5, 2006 |
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I think it's a great story. I like it. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
chattel69
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Apr 25, 2006 |
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The grammar needs to edited, I think I might like the story line but it is hard to get at when you have to correct all the grammar. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Apr 24, 2006 |
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Dear lady, please, please, please get yourself an English-as-a-primary-language editor to help with the translation. English is a very, very difficult language to speak and write, and translations can be very hard to accomplish.
There is hope for the story, and it has places it could be very good, but for concerns with the language. You DO have a story to tell, and I'd like to hear more.
Good luck! (5/10)
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