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A Date Author: SFCityDom
(Added on Apr 12, 2006) (This month 49981 readers) (Total 80292 readers)
A Date Gone Bad?

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Weighed Average (?): (7.5/10)
Average Rating: (7.5/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (1/10)

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Reviewer: PetJulie (Edit) Rating: Oct 15, 2008
That was awesome! I really enjoy the fake-out of the reader until the end. (9/10)

Reviewer: J's blu (Edit) Rating: May 16, 2006
i didnt read the first draft, so, here goes: is well written, short sharp is not meant to be longer. the feel of the characters is there, the scene is set well, the atmosphere, its all there for me. i could feel the tension/lust. excellent. (9/10)

Reviewer: H Dean (Edit) Rating: Apr 20, 2006
This was a nice, if short, tale. The flow was quite good and the action was well put. This is one of the few stories I have read where first person omnicient did not detract from the story. I would offer, however, that had this story had been set up in the first person omnicient and then transitioned to third person omnicient it would have been a better read.
On the negative side, the writing skills of this author need to be polish considerably. Punctuation was sub-par and there were several incorrect usages of words. That the story was able to overcome these technical failures is a testiment to the story telling skills of the author.
Finally, I disagree with certain comments that this story should have been more detailed. It was a quick punch in the groin, apparently designed to get in and get out quick. I liked that. Most especially, I thought the ending was quite appropriate and mindful of the fact that most relationships are not strict D/s or BDSM. That is, it struck me as realistic.
**This is one of those stories where I wish I had two criteria to provide numbered ratings. If this were possible I would give it a "6" for the technical deficiencies and an "9" for the story. (8/10)

Reviewer: bondage_man69 (Edit) Rating: Apr 19, 2006
needs to learn how to spell. (1/10)

Reviewer: La Toya (Edit) Rating: Apr 14, 2006
Short but nice (7/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Apr 14, 2006
nice but to short (9/10)

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Apr 14, 2006
A little sparse on motivations until the end. Nicely told, though. (7/10)

Reviewer: chattel69 (Edit) Rating: Apr 13, 2006
It was nice, I hope we get more information on their relationship (8/10)

Reviewer: jip (Edit) Rating: Apr 13, 2006
Short but nice story. Ends different than you would expect! (8/10)

Reviewer: Foxysake (Edit) Rating: Apr 13, 2006
nicely written however, I suggest you add more small details to spice up the story (8/10)

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