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Are you an evil man?
Author: James Serpha
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(Added on Apr 11, 2006)
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A long story about the evil things that a good man is capable of doing. Not for the easily offended or for those who take stories like this seriously. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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Jan 5, 2007 |
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An excellent story, but only erotic in parts. That's not a problem, but I think readers should know that they shouldn't expect another quickie rape/snuff story. Extremely well structured, and with a little judicious editing, could be an arty, mainstream short story if you ever wanted it to be. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Thorn
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Apr 16, 2006 |
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I thought it was good, but I wish you had put snuff in the list of story codes - I was a little too surprised. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mannix10
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Apr 15, 2006 |
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Excellent. More plot than typical action but it was incredibly well written and developed. (10/10)
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Emt
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Apr 14, 2006 |
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This story was an excellent piece of literature. The purpose seemed to me to exceed that of turning the reader on. It was a great example of how people can go crazy if they keep desires repressed and do not find some type of outlet for them. Matt stayed sane because he released his energy frequently. Jeffs girlfriend was so conservative, he could hardly even tell her what he wanted. He was sexually deprived and went on a binge. To anyone who would say that pornagraphic literature or safe sane and consensual BDSM is morally corrupt, I would tell them to read this story! It is so much better to release things before they get out of hand. Excellent story! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Serpha
(Edit) (Apr 14, 2006)
- Thanks a lot for the review! You really hit the nail on the head on what I was trying to do with this story and I'm glad you liked it.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 12, 2006 |
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certainly 100% better then your first post (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Apr 12, 2006 |
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Surprising evolution of Jeff. Perhaps all serial killers are going that way??? (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Serpha
(Edit) (Apr 12, 2006)
- Probably more than most people care to admit.
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