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Jessie\'s story
Author: Tojo
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(Added on Mar 23, 2006)
(This month 39979 readers) (Total 57135 readers) |
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Grabbed from her office, she is taken away by force by someone she never thought she\'d meet in person. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 26, 2006 |
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i enjoyed the story but i felt that the person abducting her came across aa child with his language (7/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Mar 23, 2006 |
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This was a very well written story. Of course, it is a good lesson for not telling everything about yourself to strangers on the 'net!!! Are you going to continue it? (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Tojo
(Edit) (Mar 23, 2006)
- Thanks for the kind words- such comments inspire me to write more. As for continuing this story, I've sadly lost touch with the real 'Jessie' so would find it difficult.
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| Reviewer:
caged
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Mar 23, 2006 |
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An excellent story, up with the very best on the site without relying on extremes of bondage. Succeeds because it conveys the slave's experience and emotions very well. Congratulations, more please. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Tojo
(Edit) (Mar 23, 2006)
- Thanks so much, your comments mean a lot
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| Reviewer:
Sklaventreiber
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Mar 23, 2006 |
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I enjoyed the story very much. As this is only the second story I have read. I have given an eight rating it quite possibly deserving of a higher number or maybe a lower one, but I have not been around long enough to have anything to compare it to. I certainly hope the story continues in some way, since Jessie has now arrived in in her new home. I feel the story went a long way to making the reader feel they were there, since there is a long time between leaving the states and arriving by ship in Australia more could have been done in the between than was mentioned this story can and should be expanded to do such a thing. (8/10)
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