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The Kiss
Author: Kostas Lonis
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(Added on Mar 22, 2006)
(This month 8333 readers) (Total 13497 readers) |
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A girl goes out to drink on a Saturday night and wakes with a surprise (I thought of this story one night when I was sleeping beside my dark angel, I spent a couple of minutes looking at her and then it hit me. I wrote it for her this is why it\'s in second person.) |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Mar 24, 2006 |
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oh my goodness, i wish i could read greek! because the excellence of Your writing in what is obviously not Your first language is so good, i can only imagine what it must be like to read Your stories in Your native tongue! You did that so well!! and thank You for the musical notes!! that was well thought of.
blu (9/10)
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nikita
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Mar 22, 2006 |
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Writing in the second person is hard to do but you did it well. As I was reading it for the second time, the temperature in my office got hot. Although they weren't really necessary, I like your footnotes. (8/10)
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