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Brain-Busting Diana
Author: oliverc
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(Added on Mar 20, 2006)
(This month 14946 readers) (Total 31037 readers) |
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Kevin is intrigued by what others guys have said about Diana. Could she really be what he truly wants, truly needs? |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
wistan
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May 17, 2012 |
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A great story. Diana comes across as a very real character, somebody who has a hard shell of indifference because of the scorn she has faced for being who she is. But once past that, she's a loving but demanding Dominant Woman who knows what she wants and intends to get it! I especially love that she is both physically and mentally dominant; her ability to push Kevin around in the bedroom is exciting, but I also love that she has the calm confidence to say "Here's how it is if you want to be with me, I know it's not fair and I don't give a damn."
If I could suggest one thing, I would have made more of the peer pressure angle. People would have seen the pair out and about on their first dates, and Kevin would surely get bombarded with nosy questions and comments. I know this got mentioned at the end but I think it would have been good if it were played up more, with Kevin resisting as the peer pressure mounts. I also think it was kind of a mistake to have him lie about the relationship like that. A true gentleman doesn't talk about his Lady behind her back, but nor does he tell lies; Kevin could simply say it was nobody else's business, or that as far as he was concerned Diana was a lovely Lady who behaved perfectly towards him, and he was lucky to have her.
But these are minor things. Overall this is a great story! (8/10)
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azrlg17
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Jan 20, 2007 |
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Really nice. The only reason it's not a ten is it's too short :-) and some spelling mistakes (organism is not orgasm). (9/10)
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Lisa Jones
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May 8, 2006 |
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Excellent - I love stories that feel real. You write as if it happened to you and the characters are real people. (9/10)
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Anneya
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Apr 18, 2006 |
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Nice, very nice indeed, thank you. (9/10)
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abitbent
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Mar 27, 2006 |
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Great read and not overdone. The subtle power exchange at certain times really makes you want to read on. Fantastic (9/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Mar 22, 2006 |
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Excellent erotic story, great plot and well told (9/10)
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DungeonMaster6
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Mar 21, 2006 |
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...knockin' me out with those American thighs...
One of the best stories I've read in here. (10/10)
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jip
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Mar 21, 2006 |
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Excellent, erotic and sexy story. Gradually building up, not going into extremes. Well done (10/10)
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Blackbird
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Mar 20, 2006 |
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A wonderful, wonderful little story. It contained every element and tapped into true, true submissive longings. Absolutely wonderful buildup and execution. Thank you! (10/10)
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