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Ponytail
Author: Nikita
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(Added on Mar 16, 2006)
(This month 18828 readers) (Total 33650 readers) |
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A day in the life of a ponygirl, Sweetlips. Blindfolded and cuffed, she is used by a man who unties her be-ribboned pussy with his teeth, whips her, and attaches her to his appendage for the night |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
| Average
Rating: (8/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
Rating:  (4/10) |
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| Reviewer:
whrjar
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Jan 30, 2010 |
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boring watt was she doing there watt is the motive for her being mead into a ponygirl in the fist plase (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Nikita
(Edit) (Jan 31, 2010)
- Thank you. I needed to look up some of your words as I've never heard them before. But I will try to do better next time.
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| Reviewer:
Mistress M
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May 14, 2006 |
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Ponytail is an hors deorves of a ponygirl story. Why isn't there any more to this tale? (10/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Oct 19, 2006)
- Thank you Mistress M. I will do my best to produce more hot writing.
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Apr 30, 2006 |
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Good detailed description. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Oct 19, 2006)
- Thank you jip. I appreciate the review.
Nikita
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| Reviewer:
fantazmaster
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Apr 9, 2006 |
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Nikita once again has favored us with a story that well illustrates that creative imagination
that she is blessed with.I was especially impressed with the details of Sweetlip's training
and then subsequent use.My only complaint is that
we don't have more stories from Nikita. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Apr 9, 2006)
- Thank you Taz. I am very glad you enjoyed it. *big smile*
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| Reviewer:
SirPat43
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Apr 4, 2006 |
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Nikita, once again you have written a fabulous story. The reader knows that the hardness is there but you keep it soft and very very erotic. I am looking forward to your next tale. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Apr 4, 2006)
- Thank you, Sir Pat. Again you make me blush. I'm glad you enjoyed Ponytail. She's sure to be used some more.
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| Reviewer:
SirJeff
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Mar 21, 2006 |
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Nikita, this is a lovely taste of perhaps a larger set of ponygirl adventures. Look forward to more. from you.
If you are unaware of it, also visit my SirJeff's Ponygirls website at http://www.ponygirlsofsirjeff.com , where you'll find more stories and such.
Regards
SirJeff (8/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Mar 21, 2006)
- Thank you Sir jeff. Your reputation precedes you and I've visited your site. It is my favorite ponygirl site. Thank you for your review. It is encouragement to continue the tail. *grin
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| Reviewer:
Aussiegirl1
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Mar 17, 2006 |
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Nikita,
I enjoyed your story. As I have begun to write stories myself, I have become more aware of how hard it is to find a new angle. I think you managed this in your story.
Aussiegirl (8/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Mar 17, 2006)
- Thank you for reviewing this story and the acknowledgement of crafting different styles. It is through presenting them for reviews that one can only grow. I look forward to reading some of yours.
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| Reviewer:
pejanon
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Mar 16, 2006 |
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A curtain opens. Reader gets a glimpse. Curtain closes.
But what a hot, tantalizing glimpse. I just loved tied pussy and face harness details.
I think that romantic and harsher element was well balanced and details are well chosen and spaced.
Now, if the curtain opens again…
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2006)
- Thank you sir, the story was inspired. I blush at your compliment.
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Mar 16, 2006 |
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I thought this story was very well-written. I found it to be exiting and I hope you continue it. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2006)
- Thank you for the review carrieanne. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Mar 16, 2006 |
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I was rather partial to this story. It aspired to be no more and no less than what it was. It flowed well and drew one to the finish. My complaints are few, but I will note them here. This tale was a very romantisized ponygirl story and was a bit flowery - but not consistently so. It jumped styles, as if the author was at a loss for metaphors. My only other complaint would be that the story needed another run through a spell checker. Quite a good read, really. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2006)
- Thank you Dean, your comments are duly noted. And I am glad you enjoyed it. That is the point, afterall.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 16, 2006 |
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i love ponygirls stories butthis one was ok at best, it real had no shock value and seemd moredesigned to explain only briefly her daily routine more detail would have been nice (6/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2006)
- Thank you mkemse. It was just a snapshot of a day in the life of this ponygirl. But I'm thrilled you gave me a good score, very consistent with the others you have given me.
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