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Weather Delay
Author: Masterinc
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(Added on Mar 14, 2006)
(This month 39304 readers) (Total 60485 readers) |
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Weather delays helps a closet submissive find a Master |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 27, 2009 |
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Didn't like it. Writing is passable, but amateurish.
JJ (6/10)
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bforbes62901
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Dec 8, 2006 |
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This was one of the best stories I have ever read on this web site. IT was incredibly well written as well as giving some wonderful advise to newbies.
Beverly (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
concretesub
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May 14, 2006 |
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I appreciated the fact that the author showcases the responsibilities of the Dominant and the submissive. There were times that the story pushed believability but this is the realm of fantasy. I have paid for stories, in the genre and others that were not done nearly as well. (10/10)
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Master_chris
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May 12, 2006 |
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a freat story, I do like the idea of doing bondage in public.
if you do write a follow one, then I will be one of the first to read it (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Anneya
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May 12, 2006 |
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This was wonderful, I hope you will continue with it.
The story is now finished, and it didn't disappoint, well, apart from the fact that it is in fact finished! I hope one day, you will give us the chance to return to these great characters. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Krafty
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May 8, 2006 |
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Good story and hope it is continued. As they part I would like to see how the story evolves especially if the Master goes to her home offices for visits.
In other words don't end the story here. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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May 7, 2006 |
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A wonderful fantasy D/s story... could be an interesting role play with my subbie.
Very well written and literate. Among the best I've seen. (10/10)
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jip
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Apr 26, 2006 |
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I never had such a chance at hotels!!
Great story. Enjoyed it
part 2: 12mar06: good continuation. I can only give you one point more!
part 3 : 26apr06: look forward tor the next part! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
akdom
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2006)
- Thank you. Nor have I. This is just a fantasy based on several women employees I had over my career. Most of my stories are much longer and more involved but I tried to write a short story based on a fantasy I had almost thirty years ago about an employee I had when working in sales in Wyoming. Should I exppand this story? Masterinc.
- Replied by:
jip
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2006)
- thks akdom. Yessss please!
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Apr 12, 2006 |
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thank You Sir for continuing Your wonderful story. You write so well, Your characters are so real, and i love Your scenes. more please.
respectfully blu (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chattel69
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Mar 15, 2006 |
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I would truly like to see more chapters to this story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
chattel69
(Edit) (Apr 11, 2006)
- Chapter 2 is great... please continue
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chattel69
(Edit) (May 12, 2006)
- Thank you for a great story, sorry to hear we have to wait for the return to Alaska but absence makes the heart grow fonder right?
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