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A Day in Occupied Iran
Author: Sonya Esperanto
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(Added on Mar 11, 2006)
(This month 52585 readers) (Total 66286 readers) |
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About some American soldiers in Iran, after having invaded the country (war on terror reasons) and how two soldiers had their ways with the two daughters of an Iranian family, much shorter than them. |
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Average (?):  (3.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (3/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
kcarla
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Mar 25, 2008 |
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sort of ok to start with then plummeted to unreadable (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 23, 2007 |
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the biggest issue i have with the story is that all the action was way to fast, it was as if you tried to finish the story as fast as you could to get it posted
And on this one it dealt more with "Reality"
Plus at JIP mentioned, a Muslin girl names Maria, very, very unlikely, any author even as Erotic Fantansy needs to make the story as believable to their reader as they can, that is all I meant
then Super heroe,s I only have a problem with Super Heroes when it is the samething over and overwith a slight variation in the story (7/10)
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- Replied by:
sonyaesperanto_15
(Edit) (Mar 12, 2006)
- Hmmmm
Thanks for making a comment. Yeah, I guess I kinda did.
But I didn't see a reason why it should have been LONGER and TOODE DETAILED, since these were soldiers who weren't in the same position as Lyndie England, where she was someone in an admiral ranking and so has ENOUGH time to have fun with the Iraqis, while these were small time US soldiers and therefore, have to report and so they could not use too much time, unless they were station guards.
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 13, 2006 |
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First of all, a muslim girl with the name of "Maria", I really doubt that.
Story somewhat incoherent, and with "free" brutalities. (4/10)
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laursie
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Mar 13, 2006 |
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Where do I start? Bad story line. No flow to it at all. Jumped from thing to another and just used to many stereo types. Obviously to me anyway English is not your first language. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Mar 13, 2006 |
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Way to fast. Bad english. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
whpike
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Mar 12, 2006 |
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the story dosn't flow at all, as if written by a child or someone who dosn't speek/write english very well. (2/10)
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